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Old 07-27-05, 12:13 AM   #7
~Lady Fiya~
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beat's nice... i like how you switched up your flow within the verses.

chorus is catchy.. not overdone, glad you not over-emotional on this beat.. my favorite verse is the 3rd, it's like your intensity built up throughout the song..

"every blocks filled up with boys but no men, cuz they fillin more pins then, FAFSA.. even more plots than Stephen King novels.. there's always gonna be more than willingly followed"

"carrying agony in left, pocket false pride in right..
heineken's our vitamin, trees ignite our life.."

"handheld metabolic rates, helping niggas drop weight
across the country form a moral mental state"

"they just keep huggin the habit insteada kickin it
they mind already caught death, body keeps missin it"


"Malcolm and Martin rebuilt the Mecca to fall again."

On some lyrical shit, you the top audio head no doubt. We need more people that rhyme with substance... nice track
Get at me

-Dunno what people mean by the lyrics could be upped.. this was hot as is, no argument.-
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