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Old 07-27-05, 12:34 AM   #12
Ltizzle
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no contest here...

vick-
you obviously aint try...
shit looks like you whipped it up in a few mins
your flow wasnt bad, but the lyrics could have been a lot bettter...
you didnt really try at all..

valor-
on the other hand, you DID try i think...
your shit was very well thought out, therefore improving your lyrics...
i love the complexity in some of your lines, just enough to add a lil touch to it, but not too much to make it seem fake and forced...
only a few times i have seen that pulled off before...its always too much of too little, props...
good flow on the whole thing, although i found maybe one or two lines that were somewaht stretched...
good lyrics again, i think you had this in the bag before it even started...

v/ valor
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