Listneing through nothing special:

The hook works. Beat seems familliar.

First verse lyrically is on. Tells a real story that's worth listening to. Same flow I'm used to from you.

I didn't like your deliv on the second or third verse. It had no emotion till the "shit nothing's new" came along and the sentences after it. The deliv dosen't sound how like how a person would speak naturally which makes it all seem liek an act or a put-on. This is my personal prefference really, to make a performance seem liek natural speech. The average person would proly never notice.

P.S. - thanks for upping a story track, lol. One.

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