Voted For: Nostradamus

Lmao, well, this was different to say the least.

Pen:
Serious approach, decent emotion. However, I felt your wording was kinda bad. You also had unneeded metaphors, like you were trying to complicate things for no reason. Flow was fine, but I didn't like your piece that much. Not a ton of originality, but it was a different view, but not that different. If you had tried to see it from the dictator's point of view, it may have been able to win. But the originality was just too low, and the wording was blah.

Nos:
Lmfao, wow. Now see I always though Gandalf would kick Yoda's ass. Anyway, very original idea here. I liked the spin on the topic. Your verse was good, rhyme scheme stayed consistant, and the times it changed helped the flow. I wish it could have gone on, good job man. Nice to see originality still alive.

v- Nos

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