Voted For: WiseWun

Ock You Still New, Fall Back.... Cause Your Not Even Worth It
I Would Of Called You Wack But Ya Lines.... Defeat The Purpose
^^^this concept of "his lines dissin for you" is played
Easily Merkin You With Basic Wordplay You Suck Please Tell Him
Punches Are So Off Seems Like Your In Comp With The Bug Repelant
^^^set up was horrible and punch wasn't all that
Your Far From The Future,Verse? Just Lose It And I'll Be Straight
The Only Time Wise Was Hard........... Is When It Was Out Of Date
^^^blah.......ight...coulda been worded better
Grab A Nicotene Because Your Rhymes Are Not Somethin You Smoke To
Done!Now Watch This Kid Keep Quiet Without Me Stranglin His Vocals
^^^OK..........but didn't rhyme well

WEll.......you need to work on gettin some better,fresh, concepts.Then find a way to word it nicer and set it up so it's hits well.I don't like your rhyme scheme too much.And you could use a couple of personals here and there.

Son..Your Lyrics are trash,and without a weapon you weak..
Wise'll will break "Kord/Chord In 2 Pieces" as if you ripped a "Tendon In Yah Knee!!"...
^^^Ok nameplay...but set up bad
Wise Migrated from Competitive Boards .. your from newbie ones and thats where your Lyrics are Brewed..
^^tell me where it rhymes????
Death is What You'll Recieve..But Wise'll stab you with "screwdrivers on your way to heaven" jus to make sure your "Spirit is Screwed!!"..
^^^bah....ight I guess
When Wise Writes .. You'll See mad complexity and a perfect paste of consistence..
Matter Of Fact , When I Murder You..ill Rip and "Untangle Your DNA Strands" so you'll die without a "Trace of Existence!!"...
^^^^OK....creative at least...
My intelligence is untouchable , and i write vocabulary but i still Blend it with a slang...
im GOD .. remember who made you can kill you .. so Wise'll "Shove TnTs in Yah Head" and make a "BIG EXPLOSION" ...damm hows that to end it with a "BANG
^^^^not that good and too long

Ight you got this battle.But next time.Fix ya structure up.It was ugly.You may even lose this battle becuase of it.Cats will just take a look at the verses and drop a vote for the neat one the other guy had.Some of your lines didn't rhyme.But punches gave you this.

Vote-Wis WUN
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