Voted For: Chief

takin my lines..like my 'spit' caught in ya thorat/
this nigga chief pm me beggin for a vote/...he caught!
^^^DId he?.....post it for proof
like we curing cancer my niggas 'jump for joy'/*
ya mom..she mad talkin bout she should of sold-ya-boy,(souljaBoy)
^^^If ya was battlin soulfa it woulda worked
if you worked at Mcdonalds you couldn't be a 'M.C.'/
you a ol head on the board n still tryin to herb newbies/
^^^UMM....OK I guess
this verse is charity like lil kids on the corner sellin lemonade/
if you owned a cadilac you still wouldn't be able to escolayde
^^^^weak...........
ya crew is a joke...they flow as good as a waste pipe/
chief get R.iped like toilet paper cuz his crew is full of A.ss W.ipes...
^^^Lmao....this was Hot!!

U had some attempts at personals that woulda been effective if they were posted and proven.Get rid of the "/"And take out the extra bar between every bar.Only hot line was last one.

Ayo, I stand tall, it’s like I’m a “tennis ball” and you be
A tennis player with a “broken wrist” who can’t “serve me”
^^didn't need to explain this line as it was basic and shit
Ain’t no way you can see me visually and lyrically I’ll eat ya
See, facial clues gave me the idea, now “eye” “nose” I beat ya
^^^Played out wordplay...a nose/knows line??Please
I’ve known him from RW, I was ranked lower, this is my time to hate
Your “name” is the big question, now when “chood” he elevate?
^^^Good......1st line wasn't good...why bring that shit up?
This is just a game of baseball and you’re the first to get hit
Only time you “succeed” is when you eating “pips”
^^OK word fission here
I’ve been travelling and capturing many people on the map
And you resemble a “state” from the way I “tour” you in half
^^Good wordplay

You had some nice wordplay and all.But where the fuck are the personals!?!?!?!?!?!?Had some played lines.Good flow and structure.Why bring up that he ranked higher than you?Tryna diss yaself homie?Do it in Open Mic.But I give ya this for better punches.

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