its good like the imagery and vocab is good structure and flow aight but tis pice dont show enuff of emotion in it but its still good......and the topic i felt u want good with the topic as well and how u ended it wit a suspense wit a deadly unknown secret its good really enjoyed reading this piece........
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PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES........

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