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Old 07-27-05, 07:49 PM   #63
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Vote//KhAoZ ThEoRy

both of you need to elevate alot. the structure was offset so it made the read a little harder and the flow blah. but overall the vocab was alright. the punches on both sides were decent. but i thought kt's made more sense neither of them hit as hard as they prolly should of .. i suggest you learn how ot set it up. but otherwise eh battle both of you need some work..
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