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Voted For: Young Blaze

Blaze you weak and u can't compete wit me,
I'm Lance Armstrong, u cancer, u ain't defeatin' me,
-The set up Line was basic. The 2nd line w/ a punch was weak, word it better.

U can't beat me what the fuck, is u crazy?
B, u can't see me like both of ya eyes was LAZ-E, (lazy)*,
-The set up line..Is weak. The 2nd Line with the Punch is weak also, word your Lines better.

Face it Young Blaze you ain't got no skills,
And ya pockets like prepaid phones, u ain't got a bill,
U shitty and yo style jus bug me,
I'ma end this battle like u look ......... very ugly.
- Ok the 1st bar was Ok. Had a wordplay, but still it was a weak Punch
The 2nd bar (The closer) Was Played out...Weak Punch...

Overall-This was a weak verse you dropped "Predator", cause everything seem so basic. Next time come with better Concepts in your Lines, and be more creative with your wordpalys..Bad Drop "Predator"

Painin Gays,Straight Insane When Im Stainin Ya Frame Wit Treys
No Master u jus p,u''ll get da Tank To Ya Chest Like Its Chainin Day
- Meh Not feeling the opener, nice multi'z but the Punch was Ok.

Dis Chicken Devoured,Spittin N Rippin he stay Trippin n Lippin Hours
Ya Shits Old G Cussing Me ya Crew Shot At They Scatter
-Dont even Rhyme. But It was an Ok Punch, mostly Like an thread than a punch. weak.

I Basically Stay Controlling "P" Like A Motherfukin Bladder
My punchs''ll leave "P Drained Out` like " Pissin In Showers
- Decent Wordplay here, Good Punch I liked it.

1 Look At P Face N He Wonna Shine Like Me,Got This Pyscho-Phazed
But He Couldn't 'Cop My Spark' Puttin "Robocop In Da Microwave"
- Ok Punch. Good Concept Though.

Ain't Got No Thuaghts Restraing My Drops Slaying
Got Hot Shots To Put 'P On Da Floor' Like Potty Training
- Nice Multi'z. The 2nd line (The Punch) Was good.

The Tek ill Splatter Intestines, Matics Gon Shatter Ya Chest In
popin magz Leavin P In A Bag like a Mothafuckin Bladder Infection
- Did you already talked about this Bladder?...Uh Ok this was an Ok closer.

Overall=This was an Ok verse. Nice multi'z, The Punches were ok for a quick one. You kept talking about "Guns" and "Threats", to me they aint Punches nor insulting what so ever. But Ok verse. Keep Dropping.

Conclusion- This was an One-Sided battle. My vote goes to Young Blaze, he had an ok verse but he had Punches and they were alot harder. Predator, I say elevate on punches and wording your Lines Better, you've got the right concept down just not Enough though. V/young blaze for better Punches. Chea

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