Voted For: Macreep

this was a super weak verse. but you still got it.. you need alot of work your rhyme scheme was alright . just work on your punches more. your set up for alot of stuff was weak ....your punches need a ton of work as well. work on that
bernonedown.. work on your shit your structure was off the whole time its pretty obvious what you did wrong your rhyme scheme was eh your metas were none and you need to work on your punches and set up....

Vote//Macreep....RTF

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