Voted For: Wes City

wes city... damn child... hahah you took this easy.. overall all your shit was on lock from the vocab to the set up very nice verse. nothing to imporve on ... could get a lil more complex vocab but eh i think you still took this..
i had a favorite line in this
"ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials"
^damn

Korz.. iw as expecting more from you on this but i liked your verse. it just wasnt as complex as wes cities was. you had some nice vocab and your thoughts in it were complex but they just didnt carry through. overall though nice job but it just wasnt up to wes cities...
Vote Wes City

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