Originally Posted by leady

decent drop

his sig say's he gota album lol it aint gon fuckin release.
he like "Gum on da sidewalk" gon stay "stuck in da streets".
^^^^^funny but pretty basic n seen da concept flipped a few times

got lucky on beat but afta dat he been duckin 4 weeks.
RV ask yaself dis question....whut da fuck is chief???????
^^^bla nuttin in dis line really

JEa!.....chill dat was only da hook...u da foneyest crook.
called dis guy out like 3 times but i see dat homie is shook.
^^^^ok u called mhim out.. coulda flipped it way better

a fag is whut u truly are,16 wins? u think u gon move me naw.
if ya 'crew' want it i'll "EaT-R.a.W" like i was at a "sushi bar".
^^^hes in raw?? didnt kno dat... decent personal flips cool on da name but i seen sushi ba concepts flipped sooooooooooooo many times

only reason dat you-beat-marv,cuzz of da hater's n true DR's.
neva be famous gettin "knockout's" da only way u'll see "starz".
^^^^played and generic

shit...i should be in da hall of fame if ya'll say dis queer is a vet.
chief's gay he had "tephlon on em" but wasn't "wearin a vest".
^^^LOL finally a nice line

how u a thug but you get scared when dem herbs approach ya.
ya verses has "no-punch-line's" like "party's only servin SODa".
^^^^ played like atari

who beat marv? out of 11,000 mc's i say only ten of em could.
chief from alaska so "fixin his engine" only time he "been in da hood".
^^^^decent personal n flip.. but in da hood concepts are played as fuck

i'll put da "metal on his clothes" like "karl kani's"..fuck ya barz & lie's.
and keep talkin dogg you like "a bag of weed" you aint "hard 2 find".
^^^^bla its ok but generic as fuck n doesnt really diss dude

how you aint gay....when u was in mugshots like yo marv's a dyme.
everybody know you aint "even" hot chief you spit da "oddest" lines.
^^^lol nice closer

overall: decent...... you dropped 2 nice lines... da rest wack or decent or played or two of da mentioned.... structure was ok flow i wont comment on cos its text and we all know text verses dont flow... multies were real basic...... ok drop none the less