I like this ALOT, Schema. For some reason, i don't know. I think black and white was a really good choice of colours for the background. I think it Represents the theme of the woman dying/death. Also, the red streak behind the text seems appropriate for this particular peice.
Maybe the wrong words were chosen for the subtext. <----(only thing i can object on)
I would of gone for something a bit more poetic but it doesn't really matter. lol
Good work schema.

lol is that her nipples i can see?