whoa...@ the story line...yu told the story pretty well...some good imagery...it coulda have been a lil deeper....but, then again...that probably woulda went into thing too much...and made it boring....


of her arms made me feel warm and empty
her mom died last year, my daughter is tempting

^thats some perverted and sick shit....

i say, well done...even though i was creeped out...but yu put this together nycely

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