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Old 07-28-05, 04:41 PM   #9
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You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!
^^^whack and set-ip terribly
I go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
^^^OK...............
New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
^^^OK.............
So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
^^^^You a lil basic......
That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
^^^^NO.,............
And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
^^^same concept as the line earlier

You set-up your punches terribly.Where are your clever wordplay and metas?You had 2 lines based on the same concept on nobody knowing him.Whack.Very boring verse too.AT the end you say it's some weak shit.Well if it's weak don't glorify yourself.

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
^^^Played...........
So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
^^^Punch???where is it...........
Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
^^played
Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
^^1st line elementary....2nd line was good
So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
^^^Punch!!!!....WHERE?!?!?!?
Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
^^^PUNCH!!!WHERE?!?!?!?

OMG.This battle sucked so damn bad.Your problem was not having any good punches.Ur shit was either played,not a punch,or just flat out bullshit.SO lemme see.
Bone Collector's selfglorifing/basic/boring ass verse
vs
Your played/bars with no punches/weak verse'

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