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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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this was pretty good, had kinda a hard time followin it, but after a while i got it, flow was decent, vocab was ok, imagery and emotion were good and prolly the best things i saw in this, keep it up man
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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