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Old 07-28-05, 11:25 PM   #10
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Voted For: BoneCollector

it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV..
Correction bone collector is the name of his ass.

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You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............
Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg"
Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'..
Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!'

This battle was hella weak...
i was exspecting alot more out this battle

punches were shit...wordplay was eh

i gave it 2 bone..4 atleast havein a lil more wordplay

but ya structure was fucked..and hella stretched

ya gone have 2 up ya game

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