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Old 07-28-05, 11:34 PM   #12
Stanza
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Voted For: BoneCollector

Aii Explanation

Indeph
You had a generally Overall Good verse but you did lack some things like origional meta's and Good wordplay i mean dont get me wrong ya verse was good I mean your dropped a Aii verse ........But You didnt come over in this battle you basically didnt come hard enough....I mean its like you tried to depend all on your personals instead of droppin better consistant punchez .............. so I Think that you should try to work on that in the future .....

Sorry but you dont get my vote in this battle

Bone
Aii man Yo Verse Was Basically A Better verse you came with some nice punchez very original concept and yo wordplay was very terrific i think that your wordplay is what helps you realy take this battle lol very crazy sounding isnt it?.....Yeah man and your personals were decent everybody finds personals you shouldve dropped a Meta on the personals and it wouldve beeen doper but yet you still take this battle withease man I gott make this short Bcuz Its thunder and Lightining so I g2 make this short .......Peace

my vote Goes to Bone

Please RTF in my Battle ASAP!!!
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