Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
Ha..pretty good opener
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
Ahh..could have been better..okay concept
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
Ha..pretty good closer

Overall nice decent verse..had a couple okay punchlines..some okay meta's..overall keep it up

Keyweezy
Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
Ahh...naw
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
Hah..nice
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing
Dont really rhyme

Overall vote-Stanza
for having a better overall verse..keep it up

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