Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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wow weird topic but both did their thing good job yall......
TP- u had a nice imagery approach ti it and had a nice vocabulary to it as well lines were shirt but still aight not that basic and also try to work more on ur emotion there didnt feel any there but u did an aight job at it........
SM-ur piece was kinda aight u approached it good but the imagery and emotion wasnt good at all no vocabulary either there try to work on that aight.....
V/ goes to troop for havn a better piece cuz of the imagery.......
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PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLE LINKS IN MY SIG.....OR VOTE GETS REMOVED....Thnx u in advance......
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL
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