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Old 07-29-05, 08:33 AM   #25
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artik had an good verse, except it didn't fit with everyone else's piece......and everyone else just had average drops, nothing really too deep......expand your thoughts peeps, get creative; tony, you said mother fucker 5 times in the first 4 lines......widen vocab, deeper thought......and this coulda been dope.
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