Voted For: Indeph
You hav a dope verse dropped there....
you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags...
to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag.
7/10 good opening
it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV..
Correction bone collector is the name of his ass.
6/10...i wasnt quite feelin the punch
ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane.
you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name.
8/10..nice punch
and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains.
when your span of attention pays what poverty makes .
7/10...good punch
I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up...
you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up..
9/10...Alright punch
UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade..
cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say
LOL....9/10....nice closure
U had preety nice vocab work goin on with aslo some nice punches...opening and closure was preety aiight...
Vote:indeph
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