Alrite I figured I'd give ya peep......now u got a nice flow....an a decent delivery...however lyrically u were very unimpressive.......an I personally never liked brit rappers cuz of the accent....the way yall pronounciate ya words lacks anytype of smootheness IMO...the way yall speak is unrhymtic in general so its like you fighting the beat when u spit...but personal preference aside....u got skill....I'd say ya weakness was ya delivery's lack of variation throughout the song.....and your lyrics an ya topic in itself was real generic.....it was a brag track will no real focuz....so when u do a song that u can find on every rap cd u purchase, u gotta bring a new element to it....which IMO u did not....no hate jus realness....stay up....1

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