Aiyo, anyone give me feedback on this verse i'm going to use at RB? I'm facing someone dope as hell. This is just a draft and a couple personals might not make sense, but here it goes.

Fuck you and ya small weener, my raps prove that I'm meaner
N' ya school never took ya on fieldtrips, so i'm taking ya to the cleaners
Better spend time on concepts or I'll slash ya eye sockets
But if ya have a brain dump, world pollution will skyrocket
Winning? You can't cop it, this joke will say what the worst is
What has no beginning, middle, or end? A doughnut and quote's verses
Kid's fillin' with curses, he's a sick fuck and not one to scare
Fag only let the cat outta the bag to kidnap a little girl in there
You n' wackness compare, seems tokens in arcades need order
N' if your the alien attack champ...
...............why are so many mexicans crossin' the border
Ya fucking wack, yeah I said it, ya dropped ass n' you'll regret it
Bitch, I could make a monkey out of you, but I don't wanna take the credit
N' ho ya better go n' roam or I'll be clippin' ya dome
But dawg if ya cry wolf, remember ya girl will run home
N' That's how it goes, you say peaceful? I think ya bluffin
In fact i know ya like war, cuz ya good for ABSOLUTELY nothing
Clown you ain't good for something, not even a good rhyme scheme
N' ya fall's been in the brewers so long, it'd bankrupt the team
You suck it would seem, and Kap and Born already made it clear
And I quote ... so why the fuck you still here?