Alright, well which lines did you like specifically and which do you think I need to fix up a lot or drop? Here's his most recent verse against someone else... also filled with some personals that won't make sense, but this shows what kinda writer he is.

more lines dont mean ya nice, i dont get what your point is
but thanks for the info..
..now do us a favor & get the link, click it, n' join it

Quote got things under control, my punches'll threaten him
bitch i'm behind the wheel while Jay Walkers under the rest of em'
i own you, i've had it w/ you dumb fucks n' skanks
bitch, you're only down w/ the rest cuz i'm movin up in ranks
know n' diss you by name? nah, im just testin ya health
i'll refer to you in abbreviations & have you double guessin yourself
JW .. talkin shit? man fuck this veteran imposter
& btw, i've had the last word w/ literally half of your roster
you wanna talk about LW? buncha fuckin lightweights
for your info ..
..ya leader begged me to join after I put him in the right place
thought about it a bit for spit, just to shut up the dude
& after this .. i'ma be the Last Word in ya sig - n' I aint joinin ya crew
sayin i got no life, you're fuckin ironic, dont even try to fight it
somehow you managed to drop 30 lines before i could sign on and realize it
i'ma bring ya whole life to the floor, ya date total dikes
wreck ya career & have Jay W. down like I was a motor bike
i hate wastin lines on wack heads, there aint nothin worse
didn't wanna spend 30 on you in the first place..
..& that was BEFORE i read your verse
fuck this fakin flake, i'll grip ya fuckin neck and crank it
& have dudes mistake you for Lynus the way i'll leave you attatched to a blanket
call us prejudice, call us racist, either way u should flee
bitch - you'll never fit in here, except foreign ya own league
you w/ a girl? nah, those views have long been tinted
& how you expect jay to get w/ the program..
..when not one person in it is interested
shit, you were born a cripple, you come bored n' wack
& i'd cut you from the computer if I could find the ambilical chord in the back
half ya verse was filler bitch, i could stitch 15 staples up it
in the future, dont try to go fuckin 30 if u aint capable of it