Thanks for the detailed feed man, I appreciate it.

Btw,
Ya fucking wack, yeah I said it, ya dropped ass n' you'll regret it
Bitch, I could make a monkey out of you, but I don't wanna take the credit

What I'm saying is basically I don't want to make him a monkey and have people think it was me. I'm saying he's already a monkey without my help. I think it makes sense and doesn't need rewording, but anyone else not get it?

The brewers line is referring to the Milwaukee brewers, but maybe it's a bit forced and I'll drop that bar and remove it with something else.

Anymore feedback?