Btw, anymore detailed feedback about what else to change in my verse would be appreciated anyone? I feel like maybe the closer could be better.. it's referring to how he lost in the tournament last week, but was still given a match this week when it's a single elimination tourney. Here's it updated:

Better empty ya pockets for concepts or I'll slash ya eye sockets
But if ya have a brain dump, world pollution will skyrocket
Winning? You can't cop it, this joke will say what the worst is
What has no beginning, middle, or end? A doughnut and quote's verses
Kid's fillin' with curses, this sick fuck's not one to scare
Fag only let the cat outta the bag to kidnap a little girl in there
You n' wackness compare, seems tokens in arcades need order
N' if your the alien attack champ...
...............why are so many mexicans crossin' the border
You talk big, but ya rude, n' no you ain't a pimp dude
Your a Don Juan with the ladies, cuz they Don Juan to be seen with you!
Ya fucking wack too, ya dropped ass n' you'll regret it
Bitch, I could make a monkey out of you, but I don't wanna take the credit
So ho, go off n' roam, or I'll be clippin' ya dome
But dawg if ya cry wolf, remember ya girl will run home
N' that's how it goes, you say peaceful? I think ya bluffin
In fact i know ya like war, cuz ya good for ABSOLUTELY nothing
Legendary? But dude ya wack, n' I dunno what I'm a missin'
I'm a threat to pop eyes... bitch your just a threat to eat chicken
Damn you suck n' ya sickened, Born and Kap made it clear
And I quote ... SO YOU DON'T DESERVE TO BE HERE!