s'like i reformed a tradition, of hip hop & writin through the years
and if ya wonderin if god exists, be prepared, cause proof is here


OMG, yur not even wack....that bar was kinda slick


then i shown my work to da lord, but he was bored what i wrote
fuck..i took a long path, now i'll stab myself with the fork in the road

^i got a fork in the road line...i put in a piece imma drop in the future...but, i like the way yu used it here....

but before i had spoke, pureness did' i was shocked at the instance
i felt all the light swept away, then sighted darkness in the distance
i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise
now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it

^nyce business right there....and good way to end it.....


well, ma...im impressed....seriously...i havent really looked at yur stuff, but imma be paying closer attention from now on.....ya imagery and vocab was good.epecially in that 1st passage....yu got some skill and mad potential to do damage....i give yu props

lol, it seems the ladies of RV are truly holding it down....I want to collab with yu..and some other of the ladies.......on that matter....

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.Re-Writing The Re-Run.