Voted For: Mike McGuire

It was a struggle just to finish reading Doc Holiday . . .cause nothin graps me. . . not saying it was a bad drop but nothing sticked out. . . while Mike drop
"Hes really like 15 but uses Viagra just to act like he all hard"-- alittle played buts till a better punch then the ones Holiday threw . . . "But Ill always be on you like you got genetal herpes"-- same with this one . . but both caught my attention . .so u won in punches . .also wordplay and structure and flow . . . ur closer was weak really to up on that cause you gotta leave a good impression . . . and holiday just kkep writing and ease on that cut throat ganster talk throw some metaphors and wordplay and work on ur structure and elevate . . . desent drop by both . .keep writing. . . and vote goes to McGuire

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff