iite lets see.. i dont like da beat.. very mainstream american.... ok yea first off id say find your style... cos it seems america is influence ALOT n it shudnt really be... drop on ukhhf.co.uk ... n jus peep as many dat as u can as often as u can.... it will bring out da UK MC in u... you flow on beat.. its a basic flow but its on beat so its a damn vgood start for a first time... confidence lacked in it.... dat comes wit practice so ya kno stick at it n confidence will build and ur delivery builds wit confidence... lyrics were kinda basic and also very american and u dropped an american twang try find ur uk accent ull sound alot better and alot more natural... lots of potential.. keep at it and keep practicin mate