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Old 07-29-05, 07:53 PM   #8
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Voted For: WhiteLight

Flow-Souljah...the smaller verse made it easier to get a better flow and all.And Whitelight..some of ur rhyming words sounded forced.Like the one rhying body/buddy,balls/force,amd made no sence/prisoners.MAke ur shit rhyme better.

Punches-Well...you would think White Light due to longer verse.But hsi shit was boring.I don;t recall even coming close to chuckling or saying "OOh' during it.I think you outta make ya verses shorter to keep the reader interested.Souljah came pretty weak too...but better than the other guy.

Vote-SOuljah

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