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Old 07-30-05, 12:47 AM   #30
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Voted For: .:F.ate:.

When I read the topic...I thought it was dope.Till I read the verses...and was dissapointed.You guys could have really done better.

Flow-Black Queen had some rhymes that didn't rhyme.Fate had a basic rhyme sheme ....but it flowed nevertheless.BQ seemed to force rhyme.Like the first bar.Fate even had alliteration a bit too!

Content-Both failed teribby in this part.FAte had bigger vocab.My fav. line was the one about Tupac.To me...black queen had nothing that'd stay with me for a while.

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