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Old 07-30-05, 02:58 AM   #19
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MarJay always leapin round for green like he's a unwealty frog
&40 wins eh?, but Marv can't name one vet ,like healty dogs

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....got banned 4 cheatin he 1 of dem loser's dat peeps know.
got aol girl so he 'blow kisses 2 da net' like 'j kidd shootin a free throw'.
you type da talk a load of shit get a swollen lip then go tell.
dont drop a cd cuzz ya shit a be like a "broken ship" it "wont sale".
i break all rules...im battlin macreep so trust me i aint gon lose.

Not one of ya Best Marv..But Decent..enough 2 get the win

Consistent Punches and Wordplay as Alwayz
Ok structure..Kinda Basick @ times

Creep...Ya structure was horrible here Kid..
No real Punches..Jus Statements..no Wordplay
and U only had 1 Personal and that was ya Closer
which could have been worded better

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