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Voted For: R-Rated
Gong-I was feelin ya verse here kid...nice ..ok imagery
but i wasent feeling that much emotion..
could have used better Vocab..and like i said better emotion
in a topical u need 2 make the voter feel your words from
the jump and i didnt walk away with that from your drop
R-Excellent drop here ..Nice imagery..i was feelin the
emotion...nice structure..and the vocab was top notch
u used everything that a topical need 2 contain and
used it and Executed.....Nice Topical here ya
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