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NO SURRENDER
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IP:
Wow, this was dope seriousely.
The imagery throughout was dope as was the vocab.
The structure was decent and the piece had a consistent flow also.
The man awoke in his impound, drowning in his possessions
His dream had professed an impression; a new found obsession
He had nothing to question – just his mind’s expression was art
Concealed in the dark, sharks circled in as he pieced together an ark
^^Was especially good.
Come to LL.
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