Apollyon
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IP:
young
both ya had some streched ass lines...really wasnt feelin all those fukin dots in youngs verse but he had really good word play interesting concepts(t in england) n couple of punches i was feelin...i actually really liked the verse and its content and most of the delivery...
trade
ur only prob was the streched line, u beasted... the first bar was good but too long...
so was a couple others but they were still funny and relevant... in my opinion u took this battle wit a better flow and vocabulary...
my favorite lines
and see ya name is young blaze so that alone defines ya entire bar template//
young blaze isn't really fire so to most readers you barely spark an intrest//
its been known i'm sick when i'm spittin,verbal addiction leave you twitchin//
and i can tell ya took 7 days on ya verse cause that shit was weekly written//
like i said before, to me, trade took this with originality in my eyes but i can deffinitly see y someone else would vote the other way
good close battle...
v//trademarx
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