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Old 07-30-05, 03:19 PM   #21
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Originally Posted by Macreep

SOme dope lines to leave you with

Black Queen and cheddar's a myth,like stories about the moon
And this battle was neva tided/tied,liked the ocean at noon
Shaving her pussy is the only time a day she gets a raze/raise
Trappin her d/r's in a net is how she gets a catch phrase/praise
But somehow,her crew whack ass crew of fags stay the most wet
And I swear,she must be a bad model
.................................................. .....way she fails to 'pose' a threat!!!!!
I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste
Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste
-K-trini vs Black Queen

think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster
this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..
easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark
ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…
-Daz vs E.C.

Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
-9th degree vs Jack the Ripper


Where's the dope lines? Those pieces that you show as examples are AAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. Only on RV woulda 1syl rhymescheme still be hot. That shit went out in 1989. The wordplay in the last verse was straight up . And I'm saying this because there's way iller shit out there than any of this, lol, bu this got chosen as the "examples". smh....
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