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Old 07-30-05, 04:31 PM   #11
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Voted For: Nino Brown



The real Nino was a G, this nigga str8 ass B,
Nino sold crack, he only seen crack is when his lips is ashy,
not a very goodline flow was god but wasnt feeling the personal but it was origianl so props 6/10
Another RV actor, he weak, and the facts jus be,
That his raps just weak, like crackhead teeth,
played line bad vocab not a good punch no wordplay reall 5/10
U from New Jack City, he jus like me, a newB,
Callin himself Nino, naw this nigga more like Pookie.
good peronal first line was wack though 7/10
YOUR OPENERS AND CLOSERS WERE DECENT HOWEVER HALEF THE BARS WERE WACK YOU USE ALOT OF FILLERS UR FLOW ISNT THAT BAD THOUGH UR VOCAB NEEDS ELEVATION ALSO TRY AND USE MORE PERSONALS U HAD 2 THAT CAN BE MENTIONED YOUR WODPLAY WASNT THERE ALOT OF CATS WILL VOTE FOR U JUST BECAUSE U HAVE WORDPLAY BUT OVERALL PRETTY GOOD VERSE FOR A NEW B JUST ELEVATE WITH TIME


I seen ya Last Battle.....Gangs You's a Lame
If i said u Was Sick
...I would only be Reffering 2 your User Name
PERSONAL BUT ITS A PLAYED CONCEPT NOT ORIGINAL AND WORK ON UR STRUCTURE 6/10
Heres a Pointer..Punches. what ya Rhyme Lacks
Tapeing Presents..with 1 Hand
Was the Last time u Had a Battle Under Wraps
NOT A GREAT PUNCH BUT IT WAS ORIGINAL 7/10
I kinda Guessin your a Fag.So skip ya Gay Rules
Cuz im Over ya Head Like Babies In Wave Pools
NOT A GOOD PUNNCH BUT ITS PRETTY ORIGINAL 6/10
Your Booty Allready..So u dont need Wack off Flix
But Saying u Won this
Is Ludacris..Like Doctor Phill Givein Weight Loss Tips
KINDA PLAED BUT HILARIOUS THAT FAT BITCH GIVEN WEIGHT LOSS TIPS LOL HE NEEDS TO START USIN HIS OWN ADVICE BEST LIN OTU OF BOTH VERSES
I THINK U NEED TO WOK ON VOCAB BUT MOST OF RV DOES
TRY AND USE MORE PERSONAS
GOOD BATTLE TO BOOTH
RETURN THE FAVOR WILL A PEER VS LOYALTY
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