Voted For: BoneCollector

Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector
You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is
Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector
^^^punch was weak as fuck
And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot
His Old Names Angel
So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop
^^OK.........
Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies
But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of.
Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies
^^Nice...........
If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track
If He Smacked a Chick
That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back
^^OK...........
And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation
Ya Punches Are as Useless
As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation
^^bah....a lil played

Nice verse.One whack punch which was the opener...and one played..which was the closer.But the rest was good.I think a lil more harder personals would have been better though.Had a couple a personals..but they were weak.

Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya...
Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...!
^^^OK........
Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range.
And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change".
^^OK........
Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame....
My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games".
^^OK......
Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?*
Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf...
Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..!
^^a lil long....but ight
Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion..
Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!*
^^Lmao...dope personal
You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz
Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t)..
^^OK......

This was a NIce verse.Not one bad bar for me.The best line was the personal about his sig.But a problem I see between you and troop...is the basic rhyme sheme.But I think you edged him for being more consistant

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