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Old 07-30-05, 05:46 PM   #1
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man...this was one-sided as fuck

FLow-Troop....still motion had some lines too long and some too short.Troops structure was better.Both had a basic rhyme scheme and need to improve in that.

Content-Troop....still motion needs to use bigger words and shit.He was simple.No dope metas nor mothing.Troop was all that either...but still a lil above average

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