Stanza:

Decent verse, i didnt see much imagery but the emotion was good. Decent wordplay and vocabulary. Your verse could have been better, the verse was semi original. In some places you were creative, in other places you didnt really bring anything new to the table. Still a decent topical.

Overall: 6.2/10


Lady Fiyah:

You had an ok verse, i really didnt get the first part of it and why you did it like that, your verse was basically 6lines to me and nothing more. This was an easy topic in my eyes so you should have wrote more and been more descriptive. I think you didnt try for this verse and it shows.

Overall: 3.1/10


Vote: Stanza

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