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Old 07-30-05, 07:16 PM   #12
Spoken Word
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From: NY State Of Mind
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Voted For: one mic

One Mic:

yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy"
^^good personal 7/10
often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow"
when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show
^^good personal wack punch 4/10
"Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill
cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled
^^no 2/10
man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while
so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile
^^no 2/10

Overall: 15/40 (38%)


Mike McGuire:

I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief
You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth
^^ehh 3/10
When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO
But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow
^^no 2/10
Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT
Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot
^^alright 4/10
You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter
Will that movie make you act somewhat harder?
^^no 1/10
I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK
Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep
^^ehh 3/10

Overall: 13/50 (26%)


Vote: One Mic


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