Voted For: blisss



dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem
^^^bah...weak and uncreative...but an attempt
tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
^^OK............
this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla
^^^NIce...........
took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig
^^DOPE

Ok.ya got the concepts and shit.So set up your punches better.I like how you didn't have the basic rhyme sheme.SOme of your punches could have hit harder with some better wording.

This dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
^^^NO...wat the fuck is this?
Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
^^How does he act gangsta?HUH?
You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
^^PLAyed as fuck in 1st line and whack
This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radio
^^NO......this bullshit

Dawg...wat the hell.Ya got structure.But you also have basic rhyme scheme.Ya punches suck.Had some played out basic shit.I seen elementary kids talk better trash that wat you spit.NO hate.

Vote-Bliss

Hit my battle with marv in sig....

And please.....don't hate vote