Voted For: DoContinue

ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
^^coulda been waaaaay better
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
^^^ok............
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
^^Basic similie......
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
^^OK...but SAT lines are a little played

OK verse.HAd an ight rhyme sheme.AT least it wasn't that basic.Punches lacked at some points.1st bar could been way better if worded better.2nd. line lacked hard hittin punch...but a good multi.3rd bar was too basic.ANd 4th was a lil played.

this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.
^^NO...set up bad..and punch sucked
seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane
^^OK..but uncreative
mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment
^^Best line.....
couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.
^^OK....

You came pretty weak here.BAsic rhyme shceme.1st bar was a horrible opener.2nd bar was OK...but uncreative.3rd was nice...lisp..then talking like it.BEst line here.4th bar was meh.Weak battle..but ya got it for the lisp line.

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