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Voted For: will a peer

kids wack tried 2 get in ue and failed now hes tryin 2 bounce back
so he pms me tryin to buy cs for rv cash wall street stats are fallin fast
- Ok Opener. Felt that wasn't a decent Punch though.

kid says hes not a new b check the facts look at his battle rec damn kid
alias banned for bitin unregistered guest he cant name one beaten vet
-Ok Punch with a personal....

kid says hes done with this shit fuck rapverse they’re all wack faggots
this kid cant leave he loves are lines he cant refuse like a coke addict
- You mean "Our" Lines...Word your lines better. The Punch was Ok.

this kids on my clit and im drippin blood now he got his red wings
red all down his face like his pic of wayne swallowed my tampon string
- I liked this Bar, good Punch with a wordplay and a personal.

ill throw this kid a 1000 bux cause he bothere to shpw up and drop
lchange his name cause hes ashamed wouldn’t be the first thing hes bought
- Cool, I liked the Punch. Good Personal.

fuck a quick 10 ill go 12 while im waitin for this bitch to drop doesnt no how to check in
45 minutes wasnt long enough for 5 bars watch me have to reset this again
lol just waistin time but hurry up im not reseting it again cause u dont no how to check in
- That...Was...A...Whack Closer...Word your lines more better. and the Punch wasn't Decent...Just Basic.

Overall- Ok verse. The Punches were ok, just word your line's more better and your grammar. You had 1 bar of a good Punch and that was the "Dissing the sig" Line. I felt that was the best in your whole verse. The closer was not good. Elevate on Punches. Chea.

This Chick Couldn't Spit Dope If She Started Choking On Weed
Claiming Queen's A Federal Offense...........Just Go On And Leave
- Meh...Ok opener..Seen the 1st Line so Played out. The 2nd Line was Not a Good Punch.. Overall not a good bar.

Half Your Losses Are More Then Half Your Wins This Is A Trip Out
The Only Time She Will A PeerIs If There's Some Dick Around
- Ahh Nice Bar. I liked the personal. Wordplay was ok. The Punch was good though.

Like An Arm Amputees Fight...Punches.... You Can't Bring
You Won't Make It In Rap...You Got Better Chances Going Camping
- Meh Didnt Find this a good Punch. Could've Worded it a little better. But it wasn't a good Punch.

Crime Syndicate? Only Time You Was A Felon Is On True Crime
Your Punches Wouldn't Conncet To Two Lines If It Was Glue Lines
- Nice Wordplay here. Good Punch

It's Against Your Will To Win.....Your Talent Does Not Exist Dear
Your Entering A Restricted Zone.......Turn Around The Exits Here
- Ok Punch. The 1st Line was Good. The 2nd Line was bleh...Basic...Bleh.

Overall- This was...I can say...A...Average Verse. You got some Good Wordplays there. Some were Good Punches, some were not. Keep Dropping I say elevate on Punches...w/ Wordplays.

Conclusion- ALright. This was a good battle to say atleast. I'mma vote for WillAPeer. Sorry Loyalty But she got you with Punches with more personals. Punches more Effective. Your Punches overall was ok,, just need to work on Punch Lines w/ Wordplays. Good Verse But willapeer got you with more Personals and effective Punches...

V/ willapeer

Please return a fav in my battle with Black~Magic.

Chea