Voted For: Mike McGuire
Flow-Basic rhyme shceme by both emcees.Structure was same by the both of you.So guess I'ma give it an even here.
Punches-One Mic got the right idea goin after the dude's open mic.But the problem the 2 of you have is just stating shit..be indirect..use wordplay and metaphors.I gotta go with Mike Mcguire for having some punches that hit.
Personals-One mic...no brainer.But his personals were weak.Mike outta work on this aspect a lot.
Multis-Neither...as both of you sucked badly here.Ditch the basic rhyme shceme.
Vocab-Same as multis.Improve here
Originality-Mike...One mic had personals but didn't use them in a creative way.Neither of you were creastive though
WEAK BATTLE
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