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Old 07-30-05, 10:57 PM   #18
Dervla
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Voted For: Daubs

Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
- Ooo Ok I like your wordplay, decent bar. Good Punch w/ a personal.

Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
- Meh...Ok Punch, didnt felt this was A decent bar though. Ok Punch.

Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
- Ok punch on the 1st Line. I like the 2nd Line though good wordplay and a punch.

You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
- I like the personal Punch...

Overall- It was a good verse you had 3 bars of good punches and wordplays and far most Good Personals. Nicly done.

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
- Ahh I like this bar good Punch

crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
- Nice Punch, and Good Concept.


leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
- Meh, I like the Personal. The Punch was ok, could've been better.

deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
-I like the personal and the Punch.

Overall- You had a good verse, Punches were Good not decent but good. I like the 1st bar,and the 2nd bar.

Conclusion- Ok...My vote goes to Daubs, he had a good Punches with them Wordplays there. Mac you had a nice verse, cool personals also but I think with daubs Wordplays w/ Punches edge it a little. So my vote goes to Daubs.

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