Voted For: Os1ris

Os1ris- Ok Dope Drop. I liked the Imagery it was decent very detailed like. Need to work on the Emotion, but you had a little going there. The Best Aspect in your verse was the Imagery. Next time put some Metaphors, similies. More wordplays to expand your Imagery. The Concept was very decent and different.


BlackQueen- Alright I liked your verse. Good Imagery, very good. I liked the Concept (What can 1 Dollar do?). Emotion could be Upp a little. Vocab can be Upp too. There's isnt Much to say...Just add Metaphors and Similies Like I told os1ris to expand your imagery more decently.

Overall- I vote os1ris he had a nice detailed imagery verse. I liked his concept too, very original. Some Parts you had Emotion and That's why I'm Giving you the vote. Blackqueen You had good Imagery, but Emotion wasn't there, Kinda Lacked. Os1ris had Emotion much better than your's so...VOte os1ris.

Both drop good verses.

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