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Old 07-31-05, 05:26 AM   #2
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beat is decent nothing special..........i hope you really spit or sing nice becuase this beat is not that wonderful


lyrics....are hella wack..could be hella better, i can tel you freestyle this and just wrote it again,,,........i think you should just stick to writing your songs becuase this freestyle shit aint cutting yo
you also need to work on your rapping/singing style

qaulity...
is decent but could be better...but this is the internet so it cant be perfect

chorus...yuo cant really sing you got that nelly type of shit......which means you aint singing you are just talkign in a girly style......but yea work on the signig
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