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Old 07-31-05, 07:22 AM   #14
J.D
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Voted For: Spoken Word

yo both had decent verses but imma have to go wit spoken word on this one, in my honest opinion.

Nmk-you had a gud verse in the way of punchlines and shit but when i was readin it, a few of the lines did seem a bit stretched.
your closer was pretty unclear as well lol, it took me a while to get that lol. but you had an aight verse

SW-yer man, you had a couple of played punchlines in there as well, but you kept a consistent flow throughout your verse which i like alot aswell as putting in half decent punchlines at the same time lol words all rhymed nicely aswell which is gud.

imma have to give dis 1 to spoken word. no hate though